And yeah...I did'nt work from a lineart...it was strait from the sketch...I'm sorta lazy without a tablet...sorry.

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Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.

Cool looking guy
I like how this was drawn ^^

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...tsuyoku naritai...

Thanks~~

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Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.

Love your idea of "glowing" trim on the outfit. It's really cool! So *cough* what's your story about again?

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Goodnight and God Stomp Us All.

oh yeah...I never told anyone anywhere about it...
Ahahahah!~

Well lets see..I'll sum-it-up...real quick...I should start off by saying the planet they are on has no define ground...just a bunch of floating landmasses and a center of dense, dense clouds...(yes I know thats been done before at least once) and all of the airships are half machine and half aquatic animal.
Ok now I'll talk about the plot. haha* Reis and Arlen Kuro are a married couple who are apart of a military orginazation devoted to exploring and taking over all of the unkown spheres of the world. (like...how our planet has the Stratosphere and hemisphere and such).
They soon dispatch the orginazation and start to freelance, and have encounters throughout the story with their old military.~~yada yada blah.
And somewhere In the thick of all this a transport carrier (a giant turtle mech ship thing) carring a woman with long deep red hair, is attacked and the girl is thrown over...she sinks to the center of the planet and eventually gets lonely.(I'm not gonna explain aot of detail past here..but)
She starts to redirect all of her energy to grow her hair out to reach the world above, causing chaos...Reis, Arlen and the others at this point dont know whats doing it. (yes there are others at this point).
Err.. Ill stop it at that for now...I skiped a ton of material...and I don't think you wanna hear all of it...I prolly wrote too much already...mwahahahah!~~

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Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.

And Thanks~ I was kinda proud of the trim idea.~ It has a purpose though.
It's the stuff that allows her to change her body heat and camo- for sniping.

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Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.

Sounds cool... so it's more like coolant huh?

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Goodnight and God Stomp Us All.

Hehe... sounds interesting! I know how it goes trying to explain a story and being forced to cut out a ton of material. It's even harder for me cuz I'm still working on mine and there are three stories at once! Yeah, I like to multi-task!

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Goodnight and God Stomp Us All.

Yeah~

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Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.